If you don't mind, I'd like to ask you a question:
A few minutes ago, I was looking at my deviantmessage, and I saw a piece of artwork that Saki-psycho0078 had done. As I looked at it, it had drawn images of Midaus on it, which got me thinking of your comic, "The Tale of Volix," and got me thinking... :\
What would happen if Volix met his biological father, Midaus? How would things react?
This is stellar! *throws a cookie* I would really like to see this uploaded with the full picture, it would be awesome to see Volix in all his kick-ass glory! Ok, critique time. It's obvious you've improved over the past two years. I thought the old Anger Issues was good, but in comparison to this I would say the new one really outshines it. I really like how you made the transition from white lines to outline Volix to thinner lines, it was a change to a comic-based style to more of a realistic look. Another thing I really loved what you did with the newer one are the clothes. Here I can see Volix twisting up into this drastic ferocious pose, and the shading you did with his clothes was spot on. Plus... blue fire. Yes, I really liked how you pulled off Volix's fire. It has a very ghostly edge to it, and that was something I really enjoyed from this pic. I think your shading is the biggest highlight in the picture. I liked a lot of what you did in the new one, but out of everything in it, I think the shading is the best. There are is one thing I see wrong with the new one though and that would have to be the hair--yes, I know Volix is suppose to have decently long hair but in this picture I thought it was a little too long. I can understand why you would make it long to go with the flow of things but for me it didn't really work. In fact when I first saw his hair I remember joking with myself "Ooooohhhh, THAT'S why he's angry... Volix must be on those monthly nature callings right now." *pats Volix's head* "Don't worry, big guy, take it easy." But regardless I thought it was a good picture, and a definite improvement!
OMG someone else kissed Nastasia AGAIN geez if that happened to me i would be pissed off too... oh yeah..I actually like somebody...I hate falling for somebody that's not even real. It's Dimentio he's the one character that introduced me to super paper mario in 2010 yeah I know I found out about it like about 4 years later after it was released... go figers right? well that's me for you sorry if i'm annoying but i have ADD or ADHD i don;t remember nut it's attention disorter...
I love the new version the pose is definately better and I love the facial expression! You never fail to impress, especially when it comes to volix! There is one thing on the new version that bothers me and it's the fire, it seems too solid/opaque to me, but it's your art so if you like it then thats all that matters!
: D Oh my goodness, that looks incredible. I love the way you drew the new one. The atmosphere is very nice and the shading adds its part to it. I can't say why I love that red tone so much you always use XD What I like about the new one is definitely the pose (which is one thing you've improved a lot on, but I already told you that), the clean lines, the great colors (I like that you used blue fire instead of the yellow-orangeish ;3 and I know whyy XD) and, like I said, the shading. Now what looks a bit strange to me is the fire, I like the movements of the flames though. Heh, one simply can't dislike the way you draw Volix, he looks so sexy XD What I noticed is that you made his hair longer and I flipp'n love how that looks. It adds to his sexiness :3 What I like the most is his expression. You know you're screwed when he uses blue fire and has that kind of expression on. The wide eyes, the bared teeth, I love it ^w^ Ahhh let me stare at it for hours! XD Are you going to post the new one separately too or is it already posted? XD My laptop doesn't seem to be working quite right, that's why I ask Sorry about yesterday evening btw.. :I I'll tell you later Great great job on it, and keep on doing such awsome pictures >w< Stay awsome gal, stay awsome :3L
Now that, is amazing~ the newest picture looks really inpressive! Its funny when looking at old drawings i swear because you notice all the mistakes or what you dont like about it, but it really does show though how much you've inproved in heck two years, i just love the shading and lighting there it really gives emotion into the picture :3 plus you've gotten really well at the body poses and how smooth it is~ but heck your inproving so much its amazing, i love seeing new art from you i always get to see something amazing each time C: keep up the great work~