If you don't mind, I'd like to ask you a question:
A few minutes ago, I was looking at my deviantmessage, and I saw a piece of artwork that Saki-psycho0078 had done. As I looked at it, it had drawn images of Midaus on it, which got me thinking of your comic, "The Tale of Volix," and got me thinking... :\
What would happen if Volix met his biological father, Midaus? How would things react?
This is stellar! *throws a cookie* I would really like to see this uploaded with the full picture, it would be awesome to see Volix in all his kick-ass glory! Ok, critique time. It's obvious you've improved over the past two years. I thought the old Anger Issues was good, but in comparison to this I would say the new one really outshines it. I really like how you made the transition from white lines to outline Volix to thinner lines, it was a change to a comic-based style to more of a realistic look. Another thing I really loved what you did with the newer one are the clothes. Here I can see Volix twisting up into this drastic ferocious pose, and the shading you did with his clothes was spot on. Plus... blue fire. Yes, I really liked how you pulled off Volix's fire. It has a very ghostly edge to it, and that was something I really enjoyed from this pic. I think your shading is the biggest highlight in the picture. I liked a lot of what you did in the new one, but out of everything in it, I think the shading is the best. There are is one thing I see wrong with the new one though and that would have to be the hair--yes, I know Volix is suppose to have decently long hair but in this picture I thought it was a little too long. I can understand why you would make it long to go with the flow of things but for me it didn't really work. In fact when I first saw his hair I remember joking with myself "Ooooohhhh, THAT'S why he's angry... Volix must be on those monthly nature callings right now." *pats Volix's head* "Don't worry, big guy, take it easy." But regardless I thought it was a good picture, and a definite improvement!
OMG someone else kissed Nastasia AGAIN geez if that happened to me i would be pissed off too... oh yeah..I actually like somebody...I hate falling for somebody that's not even real. It's Dimentio he's the one character that introduced me to super paper mario in 2010 yeah I know I found out about it like about 4 years later after it was released... go figers right? well that's me for you sorry if i'm annoying but i have ADD or ADHD i don;t remember nut it's attention disorter...